Tuesday, April 19, 2011

NaPoWriMo Sonnet #19

Dear Congress,

What is The Big Guy's Breakfast anymore but
"cutting the grilled cheese" & awakening w/
sweaty neck in tangle of bedclothes at pre-dawn intervals
chopsticks everything chopsticks doing lines of drugs w/
chopsticks everything chopsticks doing lines of
The Big Guy's Breakfast -- then engaging in gratuitous acts of
Personal Readjustment during staff meeting during
buffet-style psychotherapy & passive aggressive motion simulator //
Mockingbird versus Robin is like Beatlemania versus
phoney Beatlemania (respectively) -- Hey, if it's "Oui" ("Yes")
in French and if it's "Ja" ("Yes") among the Indo Germanic Tribes
then "Ouija" is one of them double positives &
a veritable "gorilla dicking" of the Spiritual Realm
do you see Voters? oui/ja you see Voters you see OHIO //

Yrs, Constituent

9 comments:

Kay said...

I find it much more appealing to omit the explanation. It adds so much more to the chaotic symbolism. Loved it!

DAN / DANIEL GUTSTEIN said...

Thanks, Kay. ----------------B.A.

Hyde Park Poetry Palace said...

Kay is right.
smiles.

Hyde Park Poetry Palace said...

Invite you to join poets rally week 42, awards are given to first time participants.

You will love the encouragements you get once you are in and make commitment.

Love your blog and writing style.

You Rock!
xxx

DAN / DANIEL GUTSTEIN said...

Hey PPPL -- YOU rock! Thanks for the kind words. ----------BA

JL Dodge said...

like how you did this !!
Happy Rally !
JL&B

DAN / DANIEL GUTSTEIN said...

thanks JL & B. ----------------BA

Paulami said...

i simply love the word play and how it rings in my head. i can actually hear it recited.

DAN / DANIEL GUTSTEIN said...

thanks for the kind words, Paulami. cheers, ---------BA